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Do you ever want to study abroad?

Do you ever want to study abroad? 703B5
Hi my name is Thanh and i am studying at GOT highschool There are many reasons for studying abroad, but if you are like me and want to learn more about a different culture, language, or potentially interact with other people who share your interests it can be the best choice for you. During your time overseas the opportunity to mingle with people from different cultures is limitless and can open many new doors for personal growth as well as career opportunities coming back home
Hi my name is Thanh and
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am studying at
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highschool


There are
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many
reasons for studying abroad,
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if you are like me and want to learn more about a
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different
culture, language, or
potentially
interact with other
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people
who share your interests it can be the best choice for you. During your time overseas the opportunity to mingle with
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people
from
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different
cultures is limitless and can open
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many
new doors for personal growth
as well
as career opportunities coming back
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IELTS academic Do you ever want to study abroad?

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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