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The bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity produced annually from alternative energy sources for Turkey, Spain, Italy between 1980 and 2010.

The bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity produced annually from alternative energy sources for Turkey, Spain, Italy between 1980 and 2010. qkoKr
The bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity produced annually from alternative energy sources for Turkey, Spain, Italy between 1980 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that both Turkey and Italy had an increase in their annual electricity production over the given period, whereas the trend for Spain showed some fluctuations. According to the data, Turkey produced slightly above 4 million Kilowatts of electricity in 1980; however, this amount almost halved a decade later, when a gradual rise made it reach its highest amount of electricity production with nearly 4. 5 million. On the other hand, Italy had much lower production of electricity at 2 million Kilowatts at the beginning of the period and stabilized until 1990; however, in 2000, it experienced a gradual growth to 3 million in its annual production followed by a sharp increase to a peak of 5 million in 2010. In contrast, the trend for Spain varied drastically over the period. While its electricity production stood at just 2 million in 1980, it surged significantly to a peak of over 4 million 10 years later; it plummeted to its lowest point with just under 2 million in 2000, but it then moderately climbed to under 3 million at the end of the surveyed period.
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electricity
produced
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from alternative energy sources for Turkey, Spain, Italy between 1980 and 2010.

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, it is
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clear
that both Turkey and Italy had an increase in their annual
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electricity
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production
over the
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given
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period
, whereas the trend for Spain
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some
fluctuations.

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above 4
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million
Kilowatts of
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electricity
in 1980;
however
, this amount almost halved a decade later, when a gradual rise made it reach its highest amount of
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electricity
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production
with
nearly
4. 5
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million
.
On the other hand
, Italy had much lower
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production
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electricity
at 2
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million
Kilowatts at the beginning of the
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period
and stabilized until 1990;
however
, in 2000, it experienced a gradual growth to 3
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million
in its annual
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production
followed by a sharp increase to a peak of 5
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million
in 2010.

In contrast
, the trend for Spain varied
drastically
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period
. While its
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electricity
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production
stood at
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2
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in 1980, it surged
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10 years later; it plummeted to its lowest point with
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in 2000,
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity produced annually from alternative energy sources for Turkey, Spain, Italy between 1980 and 2010.

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