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The given chart illustrates fiction book sales among young adult, mystery, classic, romance, as well as fantasy from 2006 to 2010. İt clearly seems that, during these 4 years, the sales of romantic books were always higher than others. However, if in 2006 the income from such books was $ 8200000, in 2007 this amount reached about $ 11800000. In the following years, these figures varied between $6, 000, 000 and $8, 000, 000. Mystery books also showed a growth in 2007, so in this year earning demonstrated $8000000. This gain was $ 2000000 more than previous decades. In the next 3 years, the income was between $ 4000000 and $ 500000. The earning of books which belonged to young adult were over $2000000 in 2006 and 2007, however this gain enhanced over the subsequent twelvemonth. In the last year, it ingratiated stability. The least profitable fiction books are the ones that are fantastic. The income of materials in this genre was less than $ 2, 000, 000. Classic books made earning as little as $ 2, 500, 000 in 2007, despite making a little money as fantasy books in 2006. But in 2010, that amount unexpectedly dropped to $ 50, 000.
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sales among young adult, mystery, classic, romance,
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as fantasy from 2006 to 2010.

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seems that, during these 4 years, the sales of romantic
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books
were always higher than others. H
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if in 2006 the income from such
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was
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$ 8200000
, in 2007 this amount reached about
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$ 11800000
. In the following years, these figures varied between $6, 000, 000 and $8, 000, 000.

Mystery
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a
lso
s
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a growth in 2007, s
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in this
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earning demonstrated $8000000. This gain was
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$ 2000000
more than previous decades. In the n
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3 years, the income was between
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$ 4000000
and
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$ 500000
.

The earning of
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which belonged to young adult were over $2000000 in 2006 and 2007, h
owever
this gain enhanced over the subsequent twelvemonth. In the last
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year
, it ingratiated stability.

The least profitable fiction
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are the ones that are fantastic. The income of materials in this genre was less than
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$ 2
, 000, 000.

Classic
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made earning as l
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as
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, 500, 000 in 2007, despite making a l
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money as fantasy
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in 2006. B
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in 2010, that amount
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$ 50
, 000.
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