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The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2019 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions.

The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2019 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions. 0AE0B
The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2019 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions. Overall, it is evident that the while the exports of tourism and dairy goods is expected to be higher in 2030, meat products will decrease. According to the chart, we can see that the amount of international tourism in Southland grew from 8 billion in 2000 to 9 billion in 2019 and is projected to climb to 10 BM in 2025. Moreover, the export of dairy items was 7 BM in the first year (2000), and this also went up to 10 BM in the current year but is forecasted to decline minimally to about 9. 5 by 2025. Conversely, the exportation of meat goods was the least in Southland. From 6 in 2000, it then dropped to about 5. 5 in present time and are predicted to decrease to 5 by 2025.
The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's
namely
international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2019 and in the projected
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year
in 2025. Units
are measured
in billions.

Overall
, it is evident that the while the exports of tourism and dairy
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expected
to be higher in 2030, meat products will decrease.

According to the chart, we can
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that the amount of international tourism in Southland grew from 8 billion in 2000 to 9 billion in 2019 and
is projected
to climb to 10 BM in 2025.
Moreover
, the export of dairy items was 7 BM in the
first
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(2000), and this
also
went up to 10 BM in the
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current
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is forecasted
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to about 9. 5 by 2025.

Conversely
, the exportation of meat
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goods
was the least in Southland. From 6 in 2000, it then dropped to about 5. 5 in present time and
are predicted
to decrease to 5 by 2025.
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