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The bar chart compares how the table below gives information visitor statisticsfor various world hertiage sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000.

The bar chart compares how the table below gives information visitor statisticsfor various world hertiage sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000. pK5Mw
The bar chart compares how the table below gives information visitor statisticsfor various world hertiage sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000. Overall, there was a rise in the visitors in Great Barrier Reef, Blue Mountains, Tasmania widerness, while a decline in the Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve, Shark Bay, Macquarie Island, in addition Great Barrier Reef generally had the highest figure throughout the period. The visitor started at 1670000 in 1996, after which it saw a increase to 3200000 in the figure for Great Barrier Reef in 2000, simillarly the figure for Blue Mountains and Tasmania Widerness grew from 526000 to 581000, from 450000 to 483000 respectively. In 1996 the visistor come from Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve was declined from 810000 to 770000 in 2000. While the Shark Bay welcomed 84000 visitors and this number rose 102000 in 1998b, and then, it was dropped 89000 visistors in 2000, At the same time, the number of people visiting Macquarie Island varied between 310 and 330 visitors.
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statisticsfor
various world
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hertiage
sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000.

Overall
, there was a rise in the
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visitors
in Great Barrier Reef, Blue Mountains, Tasmania
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widerness
, while a decline in the Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve, Shark Bay, Macquarie Island,
in addition
Great Barrier Reef
generally
had the highest figure throughout the period.

The
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visitor
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started
at 1670000 in 1996, after which it
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increase to 3200000 in the figure for Great Barrier Reef in 2000,
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simillarly
the figure for Blue Mountains and Tasmania
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Widerness
grew from 526000 to 581000, from 450000 to 483000
respectively
.

In 1996 the
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visistor
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come
from Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve
was declined
from 810000 to 770000 in 2000. While the Shark Bay welcomed 84000
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visitors
and this number rose 102000 in 1998b, and then, it
was dropped
89000
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visistors
in 2000, At the same time, the number of
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people
visiting Macquarie Island varied between 310 and 330
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