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The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016.

The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. ApLkw
The bar chart illustrates the monthly percentage of temperatures in 3 different Australian cities in 2016. Overall, The highest temperature is in Darwin city where the temperature reached the peak at 32. 6 degrees in December. On the contrary, the lowest percentage is reached by June in Melbourne. The temperature in Perth decreased steadily until July and after this period increased until December where it reached 26. 3 degrees. The coldest city is Melbourne where the temperature arrived only at 25. 8 in February and at the end of the years reached 24. 1 degrees, the lowest temperature compared to the others.
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Australian cities in 2016.
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, The highest
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temperature
is in Darwin city where the
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temperature
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reached
the peak at 32. 6 degrees in December.
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, the lowest percentage is
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reached
by June in Melbourne. The
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temperature
in Perth decreased
steadily
until July and after this period increased until December where it
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reached
26. 3 degrees. The coldest city is Melbourne where the
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temperature
arrived
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at 25. 8 in February and at the
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of the years
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24. 1 degrees, the lowest
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compared to the others.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016.

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