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The diagram illustrates the many stages of the life cycle of a frog. There are many stages in the life cycle of a frog, from laying hundreds of small eggs to full growing frogs. A frog starts its life cycle as a small round egg, which is laid in early spring when the weather is starting to get warmer. After laying, the eggs emerge to the embryo, which present 3 types of tadpole. Once the front legs have been broken through, they start using the pulmonary breathing. Therefore, they came to the tadpole frog, which has grills, mouth and a long tail for swimming. The last step is becoming a fully grown adult frog. Finally, the frog is released and ready for a big wide world, and once it lays eggs, the cycle starts again.
The diagram illustrates the
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stages of the life
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cycle
of a frog.

There are
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stages in the life
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of a
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frog
, from laying hundreds of
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small
eggs to full growing frogs.

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starts
its life
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cycle
as a
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small
round egg, which
is laid
in early spring when the weather is starting to
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get
warmer. After laying, the eggs emerge to the embryo, which present 3 types of tadpole. Once the front legs have
been broken
through, they
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start
using the pulmonary breathing.
Therefore
, they came to the tadpole
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frog
, which has grills, mouth and a long tail for swimming. The last step is becoming a
fully
grown adult frog.

Finally
, the
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frog
is released
and ready for a
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big
wide world, and once it lays eggs, the
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cycle
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starts
again.
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IELTS academic describe a Life cycle of a frog

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  American English
4 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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