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The bar chart below compares the number of tourists of different nationalities to Corfu between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below compares the number of tourists of different nationalities to Corfu between 1995 and 2005. leKyo
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of nationality of tourists to Corfu between 1995 and 2005. Overall, the percentage of French, Russian people to Corfu fluctuated, while Japanese people experienced a constant increase. In 1995, tourists from Russia made up the highest proportion, which was about 15%. This figure was followed by visitors from France with 13%. Tourists from Japan took up around 5%. Over 15 years, the number of visitors from Japan surged up and overtook tourists from Russia to become the country having the highest tourists to Corfu, which hit the top at 14%, while Russian took up 12% in 2005. Besides, Japanese people increased 2% in 200 and remained unchanged in 2005.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of nationality of
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tourists
to Corfu between 1995 and 2005.

Overall
, the percentage of French, Russian
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people
to Corfu fluctuated, while Japanese
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people
experienced a constant increase.

In 1995,
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tourists
from Russia made up the highest proportion, which was about 15%. This figure
was followed
by visitors from France with 13%.
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Tourists
from Japan took up around 5%.

Over 15 years, the number of visitors from Japan surged up and overtook
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tourists
from Russia to become the country having the highest
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tourists
to Corfu, which hit the top at 14%, while Russian took up 12% in 2005.
Besides
, Japanese
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people
increased 2% in 200 and remained unchanged in 2005.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below compares the number of tourists of different nationalities to Corfu between 1995 and 2005.

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