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The given graph shows the number of people using the London underground station.

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The given line graph despite the information about the number of passenger at a London underground station over the course of day. The data has been calibrated in number of people. It is clear that the hectic time of the day in the morning. Number of passengers increased significantly from 100 to 400 between 6 a. m. to 8 after this number drop quickly to less than 200 at 10: 00 again this number arises between 11 a. m. to 2 a. m. where around 300 people use underground station with some fluctuationsIn the afternoon, the number of passenger planted from hundred at 4 o'clock. 8 6 a. m. number reachs at 380. After 7 p. m, the total number of passengers declined significantly and fluctuation from the last 2 hours 8 p. m. to 10 p. m. In summary, London underground station remains busy in the morning and the early evening.
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at a London underground station over the course of day. The data has
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. It is
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that the hectic time of the day in the morning.
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to less than 200 at 10: 00 again this
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arises between 11 a. m. to 2 a. m. where around 300
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underground station with
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the afternoon, the
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planted from
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at 4 o'clock. 8 6 a. m.
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380. After 7 p. m, the total
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declined
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and fluctuation from the last 2 hours 8 p. m. to 10 p. m. In summary, London underground station remains busy in the morning and the early evening.
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IELTS academic The given graph shows the number of people using the London underground station.

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