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The bar below shows the percentage of three sectors contribution in India gross domestic product from to 1960 to 2000

The bar below shows the percentage of three sectors contribution in India gross domestic product from to 1960 to 2000 ORK1y
The rendered bar graph illustrates the information regarding the contribution of various sector in India GDP in between 1960 and 2000 the data has been calibrated in percentage Overall it is immediately Apparent that the maximum percentage of significance in service sector in 2000 while in same year maximum contribution of agriculture sector In 1956, 62% contribution of agriculture sector in India GDP but for the remaining two sectors industry and service significance was almost same that was 15%. Agriculture sector contribute was 52% in GDP in 1970 however, more than 20% contribution of service and industrial sector in the same year in 1918. The percentage for significance of industry and service was approximately same that was 28 whereas the percentage of contribution was increased with 14% for agriculture sector. Probing further, the 12% of contribution for agriculture department in 2001 in the contrast this percentage was increased with 18 in 1990 which was accounted at 30. In both years 1990 and 2000 the significance of industry sector in GDP was same that was 28%. forty percent contribution of service sector in GDP in the 1991 and the next decade that was increased with 14% which was registered at 62 percent
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In 1956, 62%
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sector
in India GDP
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for the remaining two
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sectors
industry and
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significance
was almost same that was 15%.
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Agriculture
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contribute was 52% in GDP in 1970
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in the same year in 1918. The
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for
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significance
of industry and
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service
was approximately same that was 28 whereas the
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was increased
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agriculture
sector.

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department in 2001 in the contrast this
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was increased
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in GDP was same that was 28%.
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in GDP in the 1991 and the
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