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The aim of antropology graduates is illustrate in the pie chart, while the table shows the salary of an anthropology graduate after 5 years’ of work.

The aim of antropology graduates is illustrate in the pie chart, while the table shows the salary of an anthropology graduate after 5 years’ of work. W8d85
The aim of antropology graduates is illustrate in the pie chart, while the table shows the salary of an anthropology graduate after 5 years’ of work. Overall, full-time work is the highest goal of antropology graduates as same as salaries of government sector after 5 years’ work, while part-time work + postgrad study and privat companies are vice versa. the number of anthropology graduates who have aim to full-time work is being the highest at 52% compared with graduates who choose part-time work + postgrad study is fewer at 5%. In addition, the figure of graduate chose full-time postgrad study as same as not known at 8%. However, the proportion of graduate who choose part-time work and unemployed little bit difference approximately 3%. Turning to the table, freelance consultants were overwhelmingly employed in the upper pay scales at 40% in $100, 000+, while 5% in $25. 000-49. 999 as same as Government employees while at 50% earning over a hundred thousand dollars a year. Private industry salaries at 25% and 30% of graduates made $75, 000 – $99, 999 and $100, 000+, respectively being the lowest.
The aim of
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antropology
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graduates
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in the pie chart, while the table
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shows
the salary of an anthropology
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graduate
after 5 years’ of work.

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, full-time
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work
is the highest goal of
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antropology
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graduates
as same as salaries of
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government
sector after 5 years’
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work
, while part-time
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work
+
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postgrad
study and
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privat
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companies
are vice versa.

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the
number of anthropology
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graduates
who have aim to full-time
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work
is being the highest at 52% compared with
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graduates
who choose part-time
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work
+
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postgrad
study is fewer at 5%.
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, the figure of
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graduate
chose full-time
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postgrad
study as same as not known at 8%.
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, the proportion of
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graduate
who choose part-time
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work
and unemployed
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little bit
difference approximately 3%.

Turning to the table, freelance consultants were
overwhelmingly
employed in the upper pay scales at 40% in $100, 000+, while 5% in $25. 000-49. 999 as same as
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Government
employees while at 50% earning over a hundred thousand dollars a year.
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Private industry
salaries at 25% and 30% of
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graduates
made $75, 000
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–
$99, 999 and $100, 000+,
respectively
being the lowest.
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IELTS academic The aim of antropology graduates is illustrate in the pie chart, while the table shows the salary of an anthropology graduate after 5 years’ of work.

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