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He remembers the vocabulary words that he studied. She can recall the previous lessons and remembers important words easily. He needs to be conscious of the correct spellings because that’s where he usually gets mistakes. In listening test, he can complete tables and notes. He can understand dialogues and conversations but still needs improvement. In grammar lessons, he’s good in remembering rules but he forgets it during applications which make the sentences incorrect. Despite of that, he still gets a good score as always. He will improve more if he always review at home. In reading, he can read but he pauses when he doesn’t know the correct pronunciation of the word. His reading comprehension needs to be addressed. To improve his comprehension more, he should read English books more often. His writing is good but he always forgets the paragraphing and capitalization. He always makes a lot of erasures so it makes his output messy. In speaking, he can express his thoughts but he interacts less. His pronunciation is improving and he really tries his best to explain more. He takes time to think of answers and he needs to practice in making sentences accurately.
He remembers the vocabulary words that he studied. She can recall the previous lessons and remembers
important
words
easily
. He
needs
to be conscious of the correct spellings
because
that’s where he
usually
gets
mistakes. In listening
test
, he can complete tables and notes. He can understand dialogues and conversations
but
still
needs
improvement.

In grammar lessons, he’s
good in remembering
rules
but
he forgets it during applications which
make
the sentences incorrect.
Despite of
that, he
still
gets
a
good
score as always. He will
improve
more if
he
always review at home. In reading, he can read
but
he pauses when he doesn’t know the correct pronunciation of the word. His reading comprehension
needs
to
be addressed
. To
improve
his comprehension more, he should read English books more
often
. His writing is
good
but
he always forgets the paragraphing and capitalization. He always
makes
a lot of
erasures
so
it
makes
his output messy.

In speaking, he can express his thoughts
but
he interacts less. His pronunciation is
improving and
he
really
tries his best to
explain
more. He takes time to
think
of
answers and
he
needs
to practice in making sentences
accurately
.
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IELTS academic teacher's comments to students

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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