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Bar chart showing the percentage manufacture production in Asia, Europe and the rest of the world

Bar chart showing the percentage manufacture production in Asia, Europe and the rest of the world p1NM2

The bar chart illustrates the total proportion of the manufacturing production in 2 nations and the rest of the world for a period of 5 years measured in percentage. Overall, it can be deduced that Asia and Europe has the highest percentage of manufactured products while the rest of the world was the least. In 1840, Asia took off at a peak of 50%, there was a drastic fall to 30% in 1880. However, 1920 has a dip of 20% in the level of productivity. A slight increase of 5% was seen in 1960. Asia experienced a dramatic increase in 2000 to 45%. In contrast, Europe stood at 40% in 1840 with a Increase through the years and hit a high of 50% in 1920. There was a sharp fall to 38% in 1960 and this was maintained till the end of the period in 2000 at just little below 30%. . Similarly, the rest of the world started off at 10% in 1840. 1880 saw sharp rise more than double to 22%. A continuous growth was seen till 1960 at 38%{ even with Europe }. 2000 experienced a gradual decrease to 32%. M

The bar chart illustrates the total proportion of the manufacturing production in 2 nations and the rest of the world for a period of 5 years measured in percentage. Overall
, it can be deduced
 that Asia and Europe has the highest percentage of manufactured products while the rest of the world was the least.

In 1840, Asia took off at a peak of 50%, there was a drastic fall to 30% in 1880. However
, 1920 has a dip of 20% in the level of productivity. A slight increase of 5% was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in 1960. Asia experienced a dramatic increase in 2000 to 45%.

In contrast
, Europe stood at 40% in 1840 with a

Increase through the years and hit a high of 50% in 1920. There was a sharp fall to 38% in 1960 and this was maintained
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end
 of the period in 2000 at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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little
 below 30%. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Similarly
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started
 off at 10% in 1840. 1880 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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 sharp rise more than double to 22%. A continuous growth was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 till 1960 at 38%Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis{
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. 2000 experienced a gradual decrease to 32%.

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