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The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in North America, South America, Europe and Asia

The bar chart gives information about the proportion of gross sales in car manufacturing distributed among four different continents from 2006 to 2010. Units were measured in percent. Generally, Asia had the most remarkable increase in a four- year period. In contrast, South America had a marked decrease throughout four years. Additionally, Other continents had slight fluctuations, some even remained relatively stable in changes of gross sales rates. In 2006, 30% of cars were sold in Asia and Europe, just about 1% higher than South America. Conversely, the car sales in North America was just over 10% at that time. Two years later, the rate of gross sales rose moderately in both Asia and Europe, as Europe reached a peak at nearly 40%, respectively, whereas other regions witnessed considerable decreases in these figures. By 2010, the gross sales of car manufacturing in Asia had soared up to 50%, while those in Europe and South America had declined significantly to 30% and under 10%, respectively. Meanwhile, the sales in North America, which had dropped tọ 5% in 2009, recovered to just over 10% the following year.
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manufacturing distributed among four
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continents from 2006 to 2010. Units
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period.
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, South America had a marked decrease throughout four years.
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changes
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rates.

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about 1% higher than South America.
Conversely
, the
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sales
in North America was
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over 10% at that time. Two years later, the rate of gross
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rose
moderately
in both Asia and Europe, as Europe reached a peak at
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, whereas other regions witnessed considerable decreases in these figures.

By 2010, the gross
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of
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manufacturing in Asia had soared up to 50%, while those in Europe and South America had declined
significantly
to 30% and under 10%,
respectively
. Meanwhile, the
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in North America, which had dropped
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5% in 2009, recovered to
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over 10% the following
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in North America, South America, Europe and Asia

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