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SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT

SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT AjJDX
GRAPHICS IN THIS TEST SHOW THE TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST SPENDING ON TRAVEL IN 2014. THE EXPENDITURE IS SHOWED BASED ON THE CALCULATION OF US $ BILLION. COUNTRIES THIS COUNTRY CONTAINS TO CHINA, UNITED STATES, GERMANY, UNITED KINGDOM, SINGAPORE, SOUTH KOREA, HONG KONG, INDIA, MALAYSIA, TAIWAN. THIS GRAPH IS USING A MULTIPLE OF 20 SCALES WHICH STARTS FROM 0 TO 120. THE GRAPH IS SHOWED WITH A HORIZONTAL DISPLAY WHICH IS ACCOMPANIED WITH THE SEPARATOR LINE IN THE SCALE WITH VALUE 4. COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST CONSUMER SPENDING ON TRAVEL FALL IN CHINA COUNTRIES WITH SPENDING 110 US $ BILLION. FURTHER RATING ACCORDING TO THE FOLLOWING UNITED STATES AND GERMANY WITH 85 US $ BILLION, THERE ARE UNITED KINGDOM WITH 55 US $ BILLION, SOUTH KOREA AND HONG KONG WITH 20 US $ BILLION, INDIA WITH 15 US $ BILLION, MALAYSIA WITH 12 US $ BILLION AND 12 US $ BILLION WITH THE US $ 12 LAST RATING IS TAIWAN WITH 10 US $ BILLION. COMPARISON OF SPENDING CONSUMER ON TRAVEL CHINA WITH TAIWAN CONTAINED 100 US $ BILLION. CONSUMER SPENDING ON CHINA IS LARGER 11 TIMES LARGER THAN TAIWAN. THERE ARE 2 STATE COUNTRIES THAT HAVE THE EQUATION OF SPENDING CONSUMERS. COUNTRIES IN ASIA CONTINUE TO DOMINATE SPENDING CONSUMERS COMPARED TO OTHER continents. THE CHINA COUNTRY BECOME A SPENDING CONSUMER IN 2014. CHINA NEIGHBOR COUNTRIES, HONG KONG AND CHINA ARE ALSO INCLUDED IN THIS LIST. THIS IS RELATED TO MANY NUMBER OF POPULATIONS WHERE THERE ARE POTENTIALS FOR VERY BIG TRAVELS.
GRAPHICS IN THIS
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COUNTRIES
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TRAVEL
IN 2014. THE EXPENDITURE IS
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SHOWED
BASED ON THE CALCULATION OF US $
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BILLION
.
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THIS
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COUNTRY
CONTAINS TO CHINA,
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UNITED STATES
, GERMANY,
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UNITED KINGDOM
, SINGAPORE, SOUTH KOREA, HONG KONG, INDIA, MALAYSIA, TAIWAN. THIS GRAPH IS USING A MULTIPLE OF 20 SCALES WHICH
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4. COUNTRIES
WITH THE HIGHEST
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ON
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FALL IN CHINA
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WITH
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110 US $
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FURTHER
RATING ACCORDING TO THE FOLLOWING
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UNITED STATES
AND GERMANY WITH 85 US $
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BILLION
, THERE ARE
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UNITED KINGDOM
WITH 55 US $
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BILLION
, SOUTH KOREA AND HONG KONG WITH 20 US $
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, INDIA WITH 15 US $
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, MALAYSIA WITH 12 US $
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AND 12 US $
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WITH THE US
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LAST RATING IS TAIWAN WITH 10 US $
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. COMPARISON OF
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CHINA WITH TAIWAN CONTAINED 100 US $
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.
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CONSUMER
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SPENDING
ON CHINA IS LARGER 11 TIMES LARGER THAN TAIWAN. THERE ARE 2 STATE
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THAT HAVE THE EQUATION OF
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COUNTRIES
IN ASIA CONTINUE TO DOMINATE
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CONSUMERS
COMPARED TO OTHER continents.

THE CHINA
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BECOME A
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IN 2014. CHINA NEIGHBOR
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COUNTRIES
, HONG KONG AND CHINA ARE
ALSO
INCLUDED IN THIS LIST. THIS
IS RELATED
TO
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IELTS academic SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT

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