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The bar chart illustrates how average house prices changed in five large cities in two periods: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002 compared to 1989.

The bar chart illustrates how average house prices changed in five large cities in two periods: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002 compared to 1989. OVMGN
The bar chart illustrates how average house prices changed in five large cities in two periods: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002 compared to 1989. Overall, only the prices of accommodation in Madrid and Frankfurt increased in the first period but in the second one, Tokyo was the unique city recording a fall in the price of houses. London saw the most significant changes in the prices of houses. From 1990 to 1995, the prices of houses in Frankfurt climbed by about 3% in comparison with 1989’s, followed by a rise of about 2% in Madrid. The figure for New York declined by 5%, and Tokyo and London experienced the most significant fall in house prices, of about 8% each. Between 1996 and 2002, houses became much more expensive in London, with its figure showing a rocket of approximately 12%. Similarly, the figures for New York and Madrid rose by 5% and about 4% respectively, compared to an increase of only 1% in Frankfurt. In contrast, accommodation in Tokyo was more affordable than in 1989 since its prices fell by 5% in that period.
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in five large cities in two periods: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002 compared to 1989.

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of accommodation in Madrid and Frankfurt increased in the
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in the second one, Tokyo was the unique city recording a fall in the
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. London
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the most significant
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From 1990 to 1995, the
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in Frankfurt climbed by about 3%
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with 1989’s, followed by a rise of about 2% in Madrid. The figure for New York declined by 5%, and Tokyo and London experienced the most significant fall in
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, of about 8% each.

Between 1996 and 2002,
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became much more expensive in London, with its figure showing a rocket of approximately 12%.
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1% in Frankfurt.
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, accommodation in Tokyo was more affordable than in 1989 since its
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fell by 5% in that period.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates how average house prices changed in five large cities in two periods: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002 compared to 1989.

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