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THE GRAPH BELOW SHOW THE NUMBER OF ENQUIRIES RECIEVED BY THE TOURIST INFORMATION OFFICE IN ONE CITY OVER A SIX MONTH PERIOD IN 2011.

THE GRAPH BELOW SHOW THE NUMBER OF ENQUIRIES RECIEVED BY THE TOURIST INFORMATION OFFICE IN ONE CITY OVER A SIX MONTH PERIOD IN 2011. DqNd7
THE PROVIDED LINE CHART ILLUSTRATES DATA ABOUT HOW MANY ENQUIRIES WERE OBSERVED BY THE INFORMATION TOURIST OFFICE IN ONE METROPOLITAN FROM JAN TO JUN IN 2001. OVERALL, THE ENQUIRIES CREATED BY VISITORS THROUGH IN PERSON AND BY TELEPHONE INCREASED DRASTICALLY, WHILE THE FIGURE OF EMAIL FACED A SUBSTANTIAL FALL IN A GIVEN TIME PERIOD. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT THE ENQUIRIES BY PERSON WAS ACCOUNTED FOR NEAR 750 IN JAN, WHICH WAS LEVELLED OFF FOR NEXT TWO MONTHS AND REMAINED CONSTANT TILL APRIL. THEN, IT EXPERIENCED A DRASTIC INCLINE TO AN EXACT 1600 IN JUNE. SIMILARLY, THE NUMBER OF TELEPHONE ENQUIRIES WAS STATED AS THE LOWEST IN BEGINNING MONTH AT MERELY ABOVE 400 AND THEY INCREASED DRAMATICALLY TO AROUND 1900 IN JUNE. PROBING FURTHER, ENQUIRIES RAISED BY EMAILS AND LETTER BEGINS FROM APPROXIMATELY 700, THEY FACED A GRADUAL FALL TILL MARCH AT 650 AND IT DRAMATICALLY FELL TO MERELY UNDER 400, THEN IT REMAINED CONSTANT FOR LAST MONTH.
THE PROVIDED LINE CHART ILLUSTRATES DATA ABOUT HOW
MANY
ENQUIRIES
WERE OBSERVED
BY THE INFORMATION TOURIST OFFICE IN ONE METROPOLITAN FROM JAN TO JUN IN 2001.

OVERALL
, THE
ENQUIRIES
CREATED BY VISITORS THROUGH IN PERSON AND BY TELEPHONE INCREASED
DRASTICALLY
, WHILE THE FIGURE OF EMAIL FACED A SUBSTANTIAL FALL IN A
GIVEN
TIME PERIOD.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT THE
ENQUIRIES
BY PERSON
WAS ACCOUNTED
FOR NEAR 750 IN JAN, WHICH
WAS LEVELLED
OFF FOR
NEXT
TWO MONTHS AND REMAINED CONSTANT TILL APRIL. THEN, IT EXPERIENCED A DRASTIC INCLINE TO AN EXACT 1600 IN JUNE.
SIMILARLY
, THE NUMBER OF TELEPHONE
ENQUIRIES
WAS STATED
AS THE LOWEST IN BEGINNING MONTH AT
MERELY
ABOVE 400 AND THEY INCREASED
DRAMATICALLY
TO AROUND 1900 IN JUNE.

PROBING
FURTHER
,
ENQUIRIES
RAISED BY EMAILS AND LETTER
BEGINS
FROM APPROXIMATELY 700, THEY FACED A GRADUAL FALL TILL MARCH AT 650 AND IT
DRAMATICALLY
FELL TO
MERELY
UNDER 400, THEN IT REMAINED CONSTANT FOR LAST MONTH.
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