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summaries the diagrams by selecting and reporting the main feaures

summaries the diagrams by selecting and reporting the main feaures G3bM2
The first diagram shows how cement was making. The First step in the process was added limestone and clay in the machine and then it was crushed by the crusher. The powder made of above raw materials going through the mixer and then roasting heater tunnel. After that grinding process made final product of cement. And last step cements were put into the bags. The second diagram was about concrete production process. In this procedure start with adding 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% a gavel which is small stone put into the concrete mixer. After that the machine was mixing the above mention products. The final production will come out as concrete
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how
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cement
was making. The
First
step in the process was
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added
limestone and clay in the machine and then it
was crushed
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The
powder made of above raw materials going through the mixer and then roasting heater tunnel.
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that grinding process made final product of
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cement
. And last step
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cements
were put
into the bags.

The second diagram was about concrete production process. In this procedure
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start
with adding 15% of
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cement
, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% a gavel which is
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small
stone put into the concrete mixer.
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After
that the machine was mixing the above mention products. The final production will
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out as
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concrete

IELTS academic summaries the diagrams by selecting and reporting the main feaures

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