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Some say that children should choose for language skills themselves,while others would state that parents should go to schools or therapists for their child's development. I totally agree with the first view.

Some say that children should choose for language skills themselves, while others would state that parents should go to schools or therapists for their child's development. I totally agree with the first view. wON2e
On the one hand, speech development in infants is a slow process and it requires time to develop proper language skills. Also, every kid, not only special in its own way, but also they can learn some complex skills. Language has some complex features and pronunciation, which can be not learned at an early age. In addition, If children can not speak at an early age very well it does not mean that then in the following life they can. For instance, some famous people also spoke latter. Albert Einstein, a certified genius, was also a late talker. He didn't speak full sentences untill he was 5 years old but then he developed language skills and became master of language On the other hand, there are advantages to go to therapists in order to develop infants' language skills. Moreover, specialists have vast knowledge to tackle this problem. They can easily treat these types of disease with their own experiences. After that infants can start to speak In conclusion, parents do not have anxious to teach their children to speak because it is natural and comes naturally at an early age or latter
On the one hand, speech development in infants is a slow process and it requires time to develop proper
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complex features and pronunciation, which can be not learned at an early age.
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well it does not mean that then in the following life they can.
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language


On the other hand
, there are advantages to go to therapists in order to develop infants'
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language
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, specialists have vast knowledge to tackle this problem. They can
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treat these types of disease with their
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IELTS academic Some say that children should choose for language skills themselves, while others would state that parents should go to schools or therapists for their child's development. I totally agree with the first view.

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