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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Gj6o
Hosting an international sports event is good for the country. Alot of sports event like football world cup, criket world cup, tennis mega events and so many events in world to engage people and motivate them. it helped in getting fitness, fame and mental growth. Sports are sign of healty community which create big room for learning and working as team and leadership as well. Cricket world cup was organised by the England two years ago. It was remarkable event, people gathered in different cities a part from matched they went to hotels, parks and pubs. Teams travelled from one city to other city and their spectators also moved with them. People form globe also share their level of interest in sports and love. International events always put you on map and give you tremendous amount of money. It provides people to see your country, culture and food. Although it is good for sports but also fabulous for country reputation. On the other way, we can see it can disturb some kind of community which aren't interested in these things. It depends on their interest they may be disturb by people and somehow their work affected by these events. it is great deal for some persons they think that it will create bad impat on thier economy. Mega events also have problem in security sides for whom countries inevsted to much assets. After debate, we can conclude that International sports events is great deal for countires in sports as well as for economy.
Hosting an international
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to engage
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and motivate them.
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helped
in getting fitness, fame and mental growth.
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of
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community which create
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room for learning and working as team and leadership
as well
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Cricket
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cup was
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by the England two years ago. It
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,
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gathered in
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cities a part from matched they went to hotels, parks and pubs. Teams travelled from one city to other city and their spectators
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with them.
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. International
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always put you on map and give you tremendous amount of money. It provides
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, culture and food. Although it is
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reputation.

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economy. Mega
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much
assets.

After debate, we can conclude that International
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