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Some people think that holding olympic Games has positive effects for a host country while others believe that it has a negative effect.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people think that holding olympic Games has positive effects for a host country while others believe that it has a negative effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion n61oo

Olympics is one of the biggest sporting events across the globe. It is looked upon as the epitome of human performance and limits on the field. The grandiose nature of this event is unparalleled. Some individuals prefer to look on the bright side of this event while a few others point out the flaws and drawbacks associated. This essay delves into both conflicting opinions prior to my own perspective. To start with, the Olympics welcomes athletes from across the world vying neck and neck for the ultimate glory and this certainly attracts millions of fans. Looking into the numbers, Brazil welcomed more than 6 million tourists during the Olympics injecting billions of dollars into the national economy. Furthermore, This Global stage sees an upward trend in the trade and also helps in sales of local artisans and indigenous handicrafts. Construction of colossal stadia brings in employment opportunities for local folks, ultimately bringing food on the table for millions of households. On the flip side, this glittering facade has masked an uglier side too. There has been a public outcry by environmental activists at more than one occasion mentioning the encroachment and detrimental effect of these venues on Nature. Moreover, there has been another backlash citing the investment of billions for erecting these mammoth structures and they have been rarely used since. For instance, the stadiums built in Brazil are now used as parking lots to recoup whatever the authorities can of these gigantic investments. Wrapping up, After having gone through both the perceptions, I hold this view that Olympics are hugely beneficial for cordial relationship between nations and are a feast to watch. There should be more number of nations coming forward to host this event as long as they know the repercussions and are prepared enough to check the negative outcomes on people.

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