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The given line graphs show data on the number of goods transported in UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes: road, water, rail and pipeline.

The given line graphs show data on the number of goods transported in UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes: road, water, rail and pipeline. qVapr
The given line graphs show data on the number of goods transported in UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes: road, water, rail and pipeline. As is presented on the illustration, the transporting through road, water and pipeline's goods showed an upward trend, but rail declined noticeably. In 1974, road was on top with a transporting of 70 million tonnes, followed by rail at 40 million tonnes, water at 38 million tonnes and pipeline almost at 5 million tonnes. After a few fluctuations, the pipeline was the least used in 1974. In contrast, water transporting rose dramatically almost 60 million tonnes by 1982. The rail transporting declined to 30 million tonnes by 1982 and 1994. Transporting through road started at 70 million tonnes in 1974, but rose steadily to 75 million tonnes in 1978. From 1982 to 1990 there was a very marked increased to 82 million tonnes in transporting, but after 1994, transporting grew considerably and reached an all time high of 98 million tonnes.
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and pipeline. As
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transporting
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road
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goods
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showed
an upward trend,
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but
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rail
declined
noticeably
.

In 1974,
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road
was on top with a
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transporting
of 70
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million
tonnes, followed by
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rail
at 40
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million
tonnes,
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water
at 38
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million
tonnes and pipeline almost at 5
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million
tonnes. After a few fluctuations, the pipeline was the least
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used
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,
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water
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million
tonnes by 1982. The
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rail
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transporting
declined to 30
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tonnes by 1982 and
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1994. Transporting
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road
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started
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rose
steadily
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tonnes in 1978. From 1982 to 1990 there was a
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marked increased to 82
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million
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,
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after 1994,
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grew
considerably
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high of 98
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IELTS academic The given line graphs show data on the number of goods transported in UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes: road, water, rail and pipeline.

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