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Some countries consider about protecting teenagers through curfew, rules and regulations. This situation mainly effects urban children other than rural ones. According to my view, I completely agree with this statement.

Some countries consider about protecting teenagers through curfew, rules and regulations. This situation mainly effects urban children other than rural ones. According to my view, I completely agree with this statement. VPOR3
. On one hand, lot of countries in the world, have problems with social declines. There are lot of reasons behind with this situation. The major reason is decline of Youngers and teenagers. Teenagers can be motivated by another social context and probability of misleading can goes up. Because, of the age level mental condition can have impact on them to astray easily. They can cheat on their parents or guardians lying under the guise of education and go outdoors at night with friends. Because, they can give lot of reasons such as studies, camping, group activities etc. In that case parents do not pressure on them. Because they think education is the most valuable thing for their children, other than anything. Parents would trust them without a doubt. But government can establish rules and regulations to prevent these kind of situations. As a results of this they may be auto controlled by those rules and regulations. On the other hand we happen to hear day today news globally, there are lot of crimes and criminalities among young people. Especially around the world, universities and school students tend to face on this situation. Some countries has allowed to use fire arms for self-defense forthe citizens and this make the condition more challenging and furious and this would be more dangerous in situations where instant anger aroused among the public. However, if we can impose curfew, regulations and laws to our teenager generation, it will affect positively and can be prevent such bad situation in our world.
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lot of
countries in the world, have problems with
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social


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declines
. There are
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lot of
reasons behind with this
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situation
. The major reason
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is


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decline
of
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Youngers
and
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teenagers
.
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Teenagers
can
be motivated
by another
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social


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context
and probability of misleading can
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goes
up.
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Because
, of the age level mental

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condition
can have impact on them to astray
easily
. They can cheat on their
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parents


or guardians lying under the guise of education and go outdoors at night with

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friends
.
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Because
, they can give
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lot of
reasons such as studies, camping, group

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activities
etc.
In that case
parents do not pressure on them.
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Because
they
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think


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education
is the most valuable thing for their children, other than anything. Parents

would trust them without a doubt.
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But
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government
can establish
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rules
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and


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regulations
to
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prevent
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these kind
of
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situations
.
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As
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a results
of this they may be
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auto


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controlled
by those
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rules
and regulations.

On the other hand
we happen to hear day
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today
news globally, there are lot

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of
crimes and
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criminalities
among young
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people
.
Especially
around the world,

universities and school students tend to face on this
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situation
.
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Some
countries
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has


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allowed
to
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use
fire arms for self-defense
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forthe
citizens and this
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make
the condition

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more
challenging and furious and this would be more
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dangerous
in situations

where instant anger aroused among the public.
However
, if we can impose curfew,

regulations and laws to our
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teenager
generation, it will affect
positively
and can be

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prevent
such
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bad
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situation
in our world.
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IELTS academic Some countries consider about protecting teenagers through curfew, rules and regulations. This situation mainly effects urban children other than rural ones. According to my view, I completely agree with this statement.

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