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a graph about number of tourists in an island

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Given is the line graph providing us with information regarding the number of individuals who visited a specific Caribbean Island during a 7-year period. Overall, it is starkly apparent that the number of visitors in total, and those who either stayed at cruise ships or on the land, all represent upward trends. When scrutinizing more rigorously, it can be inferred that from 2010 to 2013, the number of tourists in total plus ones who stayed on ships witnessed a moderate escalation, while the others whose accommodation were on land showed some fluctuations and just increased half a million up to 2013. From 2013 to 2015, the graph illustrated a surge both in staying on the island and the total number of visitors. Whereas, this rate remained relatively unchanged and equal to 1. 5 million for those who stayed on cruise ships. To be precise, about 2. 5 million below the total level. Turning to the succession year, almost 1. 5 million tourists preferred to stay on land, which was half a million more than staying on ships. The total number remained constant during this year. Ultimately, at the end of the 7-year period, the number of visitors in total soared dramatically and reached the peak by hitting 3. 5 million. Moreover, the number of tourists who stayed on land or in cruise ships both experienced progress and stood at 2 and 1. 5 million in the given order.
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is the line graph providing us with information regarding the
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number
of individuals
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who
visited a specific Caribbean Island during a
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7-year
period.

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, it is
starkly
apparent that the
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number
of visitors in
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total
, and those
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who
either
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stayed
at cruise
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ships
or on the
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land
, all represent upward trends.

When scrutinizing more
rigorously
, it can
be inferred
that from 2010 to 2013, the
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number
of tourists in
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total
plus ones
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who
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stayed
on
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ships
witnessed a moderate escalation, while the others whose accommodation were on
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land
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showed
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some
fluctuations and
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just
increased half a
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million
up to 2013. From 2013 to 2015, the graph illustrated a surge both in staying on the island and the
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total
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number
of visitors. Whereas, this rate remained
relatively
unchanged and equal to 1. 5
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million
for those
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stayed
on cruise
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ships
. To be precise, about 2. 5
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million
below the
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level.

Turning to the succession
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, almost 1. 5
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million
tourists preferred to stay on
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land
, which was half a
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million
more than staying on
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ships
. The
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remained constant during this
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.
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, at the
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end
of the
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7-year
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number
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soared
dramatically
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million
.
Moreover
, the
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number
of tourists
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stayed
on
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land
or in cruise
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ships
both experienced progress and stood at 2 and 1. 5
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million
in the
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