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The table below shows the percentage of the rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September between 1985 to 2000. The table also indicates the star rating of each hotel

The table gives information about six different types of hotels rooms booked in between 1985 to 2000 during may to September and also gives Star rating for the different Six hotels. In 1985, Hotel Concorde, Hamilton's Hotel Olivia and Hampton's are most of the Choices of Visitors, all these hotels rooms booked almost 90 to 100 percentage. However all these hotels had 5 Five Stares to three Startes for the bests facillites. Furthermore, these four hotels performace in terms of rooms booked they had minimum 90 percentage rooms booked in betwee 1985 to 2000. But only Hotel Concorde had low booking in 1995 which is 30 percentage. Also, the hotel Tower and Continental had averaged performance or low percentage of the rooms occupied which is 50 to 90 percentage. Hotel Hamilton’s is five stars and hotel Hampton’s is three stars hotel but in terms of rooms booked hotel Hampton’s continually playing great role in between 1985 to 2000. To conclude, Hotel Hampton’s rooms are mostly occupied during May to September in between 1985 to 2000.
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Olivia and Hampton's are most of the Choices of Visitors, all these
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they had minimum 90
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of the rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September between 1985 to 2000. The table also indicates the star rating of each hotel

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