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The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph gives information about using mobile phone and landline phone services from 2001 to 2010. As an overall trend, the figure for using mobile phone services was gradually decrease, while the number of using landline phone was steadily increase though out the years. Furthermore, two figure met at the record in 2006. As is presented in the graph, in 2001, the amount for using mobile phone at around $700 was higher than landline phone just over $200. However, after that, the figure for mobile phone started decrease every year, while the figure for landline phone increased. In 2006, the figure for mobile phone and landline phone met at $550. The amount of using landline phone was significantly increase at the end of period, while the amount of using mobile phone considerably decreased at the same period.
The line graph gives information about using mobile
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and landline
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phone
services from 2001 to 2010.

As an
overall
trend, the
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figure
for using mobile
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phone
services was
gradually
decrease, while the number of using landline
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phone
was
steadily
increase though out the years.
Furthermore
, two
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figure
met at the record in 2006.

As
is presented
in the graph, in 2001, the amount for using mobile
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phone
at around $700 was higher than landline
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phone
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over $200.
However
, after that, the
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figure
for mobile
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phone
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started
decrease every year, while the
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figure
for landline
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phone
increased. In 2006, the
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figure
for mobile
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phone
and landline
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phone
met at $550.

The amount of using landline
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phone
was
significantly
increase at the
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end
of period, while the amount of using mobile
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phone
considerably
decreased at the same period.
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IELTS academic The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

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