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POPULATION OF FOXES FROM 1994 TO 2014

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PAGE 100 The chart below illustrates the population of foxes on four different Californian islands from1944 to 2014. The four locations analysed are San Miguel, Santa Cruz, Santa Rosa and Santa Catalina. Overall, the island with the biggest fox’ population is Santa Cruz, here between 1994 and 1996 lived more than 1, 333 foxes and in 2014 around 1, 666. Meanwhile, the more unpopulated land is San Miguel, here from 1994 to 1996 were recorded more or less 333 foxes and in 2014 less than 1, 000 creatures. Moreover, between 1998 and, approximately, 2010 was observed a collective decrease of the population of foxes, indeed every island had less than 333 beings. Furthermore, the highest number of foxes was registered in Santa Rosa in 1994 with 1780 creatures. On the other hand the lowest number of foxes was record in Santa Cruz in 2000 with 15 creatures. To sum up, the biggest fox’ population was observed in Santa Cruz, despite some decreases; meanwhile the smallest one in San Miguel, despite some growth from 2006 to 2014.
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The chart below illustrates the
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on four
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Californian islands from1944 to 2014. The four locations
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are San Miguel, Santa Cruz, Santa Rosa and Santa Catalina.

Overall
, the island with the biggest
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fox’
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is Santa Cruz, here between 1994 and 1996
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lived
more than 1, 333
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and in 2014 around 1, 666. Meanwhile, the more unpopulated land is San Miguel, here from 1994 to 1996
were recorded
more or less 333
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foxes
and in 2014 less than 1, 000 creatures.
Moreover
, between 1998 and, approximately, 2010
was observed
a collective decrease of the
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of
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,
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every island had less than 333 beings.

Furthermore
, the highest number of
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was registered
in Santa Rosa in 1994 with 1780 creatures.
On the other hand
the lowest number of
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was record in Santa Cruz in 2000 with 15 creatures.

To sum up, the biggest
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was observed
in Santa Cruz, despite
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decreases; meanwhile the smallest one in San Miguel, despite
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growth from 2006 to 2014.
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