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comparison between favourite takeways in the UK and number of Indian restaurants in the UK

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The bar chart demonstrates number of Indian restaurants in the UK between 1960 to 2015 and in compare popular takeaways in ibidem shown by pie chart. Apparently Chinese and Indian food are more popular than different food marked in the pie chart moreover the number of Indian restaurants has been growing in the bar chart. The pie chart represents the great deal of Chinese and Indian food selecting by people whilst Mexican, Japanese and Greek food are not their taste. In addition, the bar chart illustrates significant growth of Indian restaurant, particularly between 1960 to 2007. However, it can be said that, this level remained almost constant since 2009 till 2015. Overall, by far, Indian dishes are extremely popular in the UK therefore, the growth of Indian restaurants in the given years are not surprising. Although Chinese food is far the favorite one as well.

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chart
 demonstrates number of Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurants
 in the UK Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1960 and 2015".between 1960 and 2015
between 1960 to 2015
 and in compare popular takeaways in ibidem shown by pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
. Apparently
 Chinese and Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 are more popular than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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food
 marked in the pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
moreover
 the number of Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurants
 has been growing in the bar chart.

The pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 represents the great deal of Chinese and Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 selecting by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 whilst Mexican, Japanese and Greek You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 are not their taste.

In addition
, the bar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 illustrates significant growth of Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
, particularly
Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1960 and 2007".between 1960 and 2007
between 1960 to 2007
. However
, it can be said
 that, this level remained almost constant since 2009 till 2015.

Overall
, by far, Indian dishes are extremely
 popular in the UK therefore
, the growth of Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurants
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 years are not surprising. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 Chinese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 is far the favorite one as well
. 