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the chart enumerates data about the export earnings of one country’s in several product categories including petroleum, engineered, gems and jewellery, agricultural and textile in 2015 and 2016 while the table gives how the values of these products change in per category through one year as a rate. Overall, it is clear that, the petroleum products and engineered goods were the main sources of export income while textiles were the least however the biggest value increase took place in textile sector. Meanwhile, only value decrease happened in gems and jewellery products. First, petroleum and engineered goods had about the close earnings which was nearly 61 and 58 billion $ respectively in 2015. After one year, although the increase rate of engineered products was tripled petroleum ones, still biggest part of income came from petroleum with 62 billion $. Besides these two sectors, agricultural outputs composed nearly 31 billion $ of income and it only rose up 0. 81 and reached nearly 32 billion $ in next year. In addition, the value of textile products dramatically increased as 15. 24% and just over 30 billion $ in 2016. Turning to the gems and jewellery, it followed downward trend and decreased during one year. In 2015, the profit which taken from this sector was nearly under 45 billion $ nevertheless it went down nearly over 40 billion $ because of 5. 18% value lost.
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chart enumerates data about the export earnings of one country’s in several
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categories including
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,
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engineered
, gems and
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jewellery
, agricultural and
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textile
in 2015 and 2016 while the table gives how the values of these
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products
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that, the
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petroleum
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and
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engineered
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were the main sources of export income while
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increase took place in
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sector. Meanwhile,
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decrease happened in gems and
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had about the close earnings which was
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61 and 58
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, although the increase rate of
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was tripled
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ones,
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with 62
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31
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, it followed downward trend and decreased during one
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IELTS academic petroleum enginnered textile goods

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6.0
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