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Overall, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight phrases, commencing from planting seeds into the ground and blossoming a flower with fruits.

Overall, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight phrases, commencing from planting seeds into the ground and blossoming a flower with fruits. X7EqN
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a plant with fruit. Overall, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight phrases, commencing from planting seeds into the ground and blossoming a flower with fruits. At the initial stage, people plant seeds from the fruit with seeds, and it need a water and sunlight to grow up; after that it will be germination; then, it will sprout. Subsequently, in seeding stage, it will be bigger than before. Middle stages, it will have more leafs, and it will be faller during this period; in other words, the more leafs it will have, the taller it will be. Meanwhile, it will blossom. At the final stage, it will have fruits after it blossomed.
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a plant with fruit.

Overall
, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight phrases, commencing from planting seeds into the ground and blossoming a flower with fruits.

At the initial
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,
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people
plant seeds from the fruit with seeds, and it
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a water and sunlight to grow up; after that it will be germination; then, it will sprout.

Subsequently
, in seeding
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, it will be bigger than
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. Middle
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, it will have more leafs, and it will be
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faller
during this period;
in other words
, the more leafs it will have, the taller it will be. Meanwhile, it will blossom.

At the final
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, it will have fruits after it blossomed.
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IELTS academic Overall, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight phrases, commencing from planting seeds into the ground and blossoming a flower with fruits.

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