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the map below show paradise island in the past and at present. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant

the map below show paradise island in the past and at present. ENwLM

The two maps illustrate the different features of Paradise Island before and after constructing some touristic infrastructure. Generally speaking, the biggest change in the Island is the more build-up and better touristic look, with more entertainment facilities than it was previously. One interesting change is that a new cycle path has been build around and across the isle in contemporary. First, it can clearly be seen that the vast majority of the island was merely unused. Since it has only a small beach at the North-West of the mainland and some trees planted crosswise. However, the central zone is mostly free. Looking at the map now, we can see that a hotel complex has been built over the place that used to be for the scientific research station. Another main const ruction is in the middle of the map, there is a new circular restaurant has been built. Also, there is a cut down of trees in order to make spaces for the new makeover. Next, a new swimming pool has been erected to the north of the hotel, in the time, the pier at the lower west has been enlarged and the on water transportation has converted from boat to cruise ship. Come to the east of the picture, where used to be only natural spring, now a cafeteria and a BBQ Area are added. At the North-West of the design, a scenic lookout has been introduced and ready to perform. To recap, there are so many frameworks has been opened up for use and make the Paradise Island become more commercial usage

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