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Number of visitors to the 4 different museums

Number of visitors to the 4 different museums 73mnb

The line graph gives information about the figure of visitors to four different museums, Louvre, Valican Museums, London Science, and Sherizhen Museum from 1980 to 2015 At a glance to the graph, we can see that Louvre and Vatican Museums were became more popular through out the period of time from 1980 to 2015. Tourits to Louvere reached at a peak of 9. 5 millions in 2015 from just under 8 millions in 1980. Once there was a falling in the number of visitors between 1995-2000. In the same way as Louvre, travellers to the Vatican museums also was on increase during thise time period. But there was a sharp escalation in the case of Vatican Museum from near 5 millions in 1980 to just over 9 millions in 2015. On the other hand, ofter 1985 the people who are interested to visit London Science Museum decreased gradually. In 1980's total sum of people visit London Science Museum was 4 millions and reached a low of around 2 millions in 2015. When it comes to Shenzhen Museum, until the end of 19th century, visitor's number was dropping and later it started to rise slowly and over a period of 15 years the number increased at least 0. 5 millions until 2015.

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