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Money spend on education of the adult

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The graph describe the number of adult education and money spent during course the highest percentage of idle to interest in subject is 40% while the lowest percent to meet people is 9% however 38% of adult receive their qualifications still 12% where able to replace a nice working environment education was also match with the recent job of 22% adult. Although 20% and joy study but people believe the cost of learning is also important majorly each person said 40% of the course why 25% and 35% for that taxpayers and employers respective overall it is good to educate themselves with a better knowledge of financial conditions

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