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Meuseam visitor number, 2000-2005

Meuseam visitor number, 2000-2005 6MN0
the bar graph illustrates amount of people visiting met, edo and national museams at newyork, tokyo and china in the period from 2000 to 2005. overall, what stands out from the graph that edo museum in tokyo had more visitors. another interesting points is that amount of people toured in chinese, national museum was less in 2020, which increased significantly over half a decade. looking at yhe details, there were 12milion visitors in met the year 2020
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bar graph illustrates amount of
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visiting met,
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edo
and national
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museams
at
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newyork
,
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tokyo
and china in the period from 2000 to 2005.
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overall
, what stands out from the graph that
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edo
museum in
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tokyo
had more visitors.
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another
interesting points is that amount of
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people
toured in
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chinese
, national museum was less in 2020, which increased
significantly
over half a decade.
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looking
at
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yhe
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details
, there were 12milion visitors in met the year 2020
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IELTS academic Meuseam visitor number, 2000-2005

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  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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