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Methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes

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The following diagrams illustrate two ways of collecting water in order to irrigate. Overall, the diagrams indicates the irrigation manually. However, in the second diagram the waste of water and the force and energy is less than the first one. First, farmers can use a swing basket which is made of bamboo or leather. It is carried using ropes. It is filled by water after the basket is out of the irrigation channel with the usual depth of 1 to 2 metres. Finally, the filled basket is carried to the fields for irrigation. The next process begins with ropes that are attached to a cow. The ropes are tied to a bucket in a 50 metres well. Initially, the bucket is pull out of the well by means of ropes attached to the cow. The bucket is moved smoothly to the surface through pulley and rollers. Eventually, the water is poured down on the irrigation channels. The process starts over again with cow’s movement on the slope.
The following diagrams illustrate two ways of collecting
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water
in order to irrigate.

Overall
, the diagrams indicates the irrigation
manually
.
However
, in the second diagram the waste of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
and the force and energy is less than the
first
one.

First
, farmers can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a swing basket which
is made
of bamboo or leather. It
is carried
using
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ropes
. It
is filled
by
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water
after the basket is out of the irrigation channel with the usual depth of 1 to 2
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metres
.
Finally
, the filled basket
is carried
to the fields for irrigation.

The
next
process
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begins
with
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ropes
that
are attached
to a cow. The
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ropes
are tied
to a bucket in a 50
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metres
well.
Initially
, the bucket is pull out of the well by means of
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ropes
attached to the cow. The bucket is
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moved
smoothly
to the surface through pulley and rollers.
Eventually
, the
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water
is poured
down on the irrigation channels. The process
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starts
over again with cow’s movement on the slope.
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IELTS academic Methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes

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167 words
6.5
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