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a diagram about the making matches

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This diagram gives information about the construction stages of the match and the tools and equipment used in the making. First, the logs collected from the forest are sent to the peeler and are stripped. It is then cut into small sizes in a chopper. Immediately after cutting, aluminum phosphate is poured into the full tank and excess aluminum phosphate is dried in the dryer. Secondly, dried matches are poured into a funnel and, thanks to the blower, they pass through the metal channel and fall into the landfill. Finally, the matches in the storage area are sorted back into the inserter with the help of a funnel. The matched matches are placed in the holes of the specially designed perforated steel belt. Then the matches are dipped into the paraffin wax tank, then the based chemical tank and finally the medicine chemical tank. Finally, the matches are dried in the drying zone and are on their way to the packing zone for packaging. After packaging, it is ready to use.
This diagram gives information about the construction stages of the
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match
and the tools and equipment
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used
in the making.

First
, the logs collected from the forest are
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sent
to the peeler and
are stripped
. It is then
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cut
into
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small
sizes in a chopper. Immediately after cutting, aluminum phosphate
is poured
into the full
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tank
and excess aluminum phosphate
is dried
in the dryer.

Secondly
, dried
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matches
are poured
into a funnel and, thanks to the blower, they pass through the metal channel and fall into the landfill.

Finally
, the
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matches
in the storage area
are sorted
back into the inserter with the
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help
of a funnel. The matched
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matches
are placed
in the holes of the
specially
designed perforated steel belt. Then the
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matches
are dipped
into the paraffin wax
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tank
, then the based chemical
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tank
and
finally
the medicine chemical
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tank
.
Finally
, the
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matches
are dried
in the drying zone and are on their way to the packing zone for packaging. After packaging, it is ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
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IELTS academic a diagram about the making matches

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4 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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