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The diagram below show a town square and surrounding area in 2014 and the plans for development of the area to be completed by 2020.summurise the information but selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show a town square and surrounding area in 2014 and the plans for development of the area to be completed by 2020. summurise the information but selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. o8pVK
The maps compare the developments takes a place in town square and surrounding area between 2014 to 2020. Overall, majority of the changes took place in the southern area and South eastern area administration buildings develope bars and restaurant and shops. To start with, in the 2014 town square and surrounding area most change in 2020. firstly, northern area fish market and town hall to change fish market removed and make a supermarket. However history Museum removed and to make way a new local artist gallery, . Moreover, history Museum beside Library and southern side fish restaurant removed and makeba bars and restaurant. In the end, the most noticeable change is that administrative building is converted more bars and restaurant and shops. Furthermore, southern side fish restaurant and bar on top of that build up cevered seating and children's play ground. Moreover northern side fish market and town hall to be down side of town hall bandstand removed and make a plant of beds. In the middle of fountaion is as it is same in 2020.
The maps compare the developments takes a place in
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took place in the southern
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area
and South eastern
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area
administration buildings
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develope
bars and
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restaurant
and shops. To
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with, in the 2014
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town
square and surrounding
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area
most
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change
in 2020.
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firstly
, northern
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area
fish market and
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town
hall to
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change
fish market
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removed
and
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make
a supermarket.
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history Museum
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removed
and to
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way a new local artist gallery
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Moreover
, history Museum beside Library and southern side fish
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restaurant
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removed
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bars and
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restaurant
. In the
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, the most noticeable
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is that administrative building
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more bars and
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restaurant
and shops.
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, southern side fish
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restaurant
and bar
on top of that
build up
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cevered
seating and children's play ground.
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northern side fish market and
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hall to be
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hall bandstand
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a plant of beds. In the middle of
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IELTS academic The diagram below show a town square and surrounding area in 2014 and the plans for development of the area to be completed by 2020. summurise the information but selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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