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The given chart indicates the population in one European country.

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The given chart indicates the population in one European country. As can been seen in the line chart, the birth population and the death population stood at 700000 and 750000 in 1950 respectively. There was a dramatic growth from 750000 to 1000000 between 1950 and 1970 for birth rate, which was at the highest level. However, after that, it experienced a sharply decrease to 550000 until 1990, which reached a floor. It was noticeable that both birth rate and death rate reached at 700000 in 1982. The period from 1990 to 2010 witnessed a rise from 550000 to 700000 for birth rate. And then, it will keep stable until 2050. Different from the fluctuate trend from 1950 to 2010 for the birth rate, the death rate held steady during this period. The birth rate is predicted to go down slightly from 700000 to 680000 between 2010 and 2030. But in the subsequent stage, there will be a significant increase to 800000 until 2050. What is worth mentioning is that in 2035, the death rate will overtake the birth rate. Overall, a hundred years ago, the birth rate exceeded the death rate, but a hundred years later, the death rate exceeded the birth rate.
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chart indicates the population in one European country.

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in the line chart, the
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population and the death population stood at 700000 and 750000 in 1950
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. There was a dramatic growth from 750000 to 1000000 between 1950 and 1970 for
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birth
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, which was at the highest level.
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to 550000 until 1990, which reached a floor. It was noticeable that both
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rate
and death
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reached at 700000 in 1982. The period from 1990 to 2010 witnessed a rise from 550000 to 700000 for
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birth
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. And then, it will
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stable until 2050.

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trend from 1950 to 2010 for the
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, the death
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held steady during this period. The
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is predicted
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from 700000 to 680000 between 2010 and 2030.
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in the subsequent stage, there will be a significant increase to 800000 until 2050. What is worth mentioning is that in 2035, the death
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will overtake the
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rate.

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, a hundred years ago, the
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exceeded the death
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,
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a hundred years later, the death
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exceeded the
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.
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IELTS academic The given chart indicates the population in one European country.

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