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The pie chart gives us information about different modes that people of Canada and Australia prefer to access news (TV, online, print, radio, not specified). Overall, large sections of the population in both Canada and Australia prefer Internet to catch up with the news. but the majority of Canadians go for television to watch news. But the internet still accounts first choice for Australians. A small section of the population also shows interest in radio and print but as compared to Australians more percentage of the Canadians make use of print and radio for news. In Canada, 36% of the population use online methods to gather news whereas 52% of Australians watch news by online mode TV account majority in Canada 40% but second most preferred in Australia 37%. However, 14% of the Canadian population use newspaper and almost half (7%) of Australians use the printing method to observe news. In terms of gathering news by means of radio, Canada accounts for 7% and 2% of Australians prefer radio to access news. Others or non-specified methods of viewing news account 3% and 2% respectively for Canada and Australia
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in both Canada and Australia prefer Internet to catch up with the
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as compared to Australians more percentage of the Canadians
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of print and
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In Canada, 36% of the
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online methods to gather
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whereas 52% of Australians
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by online mode TV
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majority in Canada 40%
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second most preferred in Australia 37%.
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newspaper and almost half (7%) of Australians
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the printing method to observe
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by means of
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, Canada
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for 7% and 2% of Australians prefer
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to access news.

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3% and 2%
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for Canada and Australia
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IELTS academic methods of accessing news in Canada and Australia.

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6.5
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