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Map illustration on Grange Park from 1920 to current state

Map illustration on Grange Park from 1920 to current state m8l1A

The map illustrates how Grange Park has evolved in the past century since 1920. Overall, Grange Park has undergone good changes from the past, in the way things are organized. Various significant developments in its infrastructure have happened appreciably. In 1920, the park had seating arrangements at the borders. This park has two entrances on the front and rear ends. A fountain in the center of the park seems to be welcoming the people from the entrance. while the stage for musicians symbolically says that people were interested in music performances. Three Rose gardens and a pond for water plants were also well maintained. Today, this park has drastically changed with the rose garden in the middle with seatings on all 4 sides. there is also a cafe that people today would love to visit. Kids are also encouraged to come and play at the children's area. An Amphitheatre is constructed exclusively for music lovers to attend concerts. Otherwise, the park has still got the same 2 entrances.

The map illustrates how Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 has evolved in the past century since 1920.

Overall
, Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 has undergone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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changes
 from the past, in the way things are organized
. Various significant developments in its infrastructure have happened appreciably
.

In 1920, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 had seating arrangements at the borders. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has two entrances on the front and rear ends. A fountain in the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 seems to be welcoming the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 from the entrance. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
 the stage for musicians symbolically
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people
were interested
 in music performances. Three Rose gardens and a pond for water plants were also
 well maintained.

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Today
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has drastically
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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seatings on
 all 4 sides. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
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cafe
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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today
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love
 to visit. Kids are also
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come
 and play at the children's area. An Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
is constructed
 exclusively for music lovers to attend concerts. Otherwise
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the same 2 entrances. 