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The given map chart depicts the information about the improvement of the village of Rye mouth from 1995to present

The given map chart depicts the information about the improvement of the village of Rye mouth from 1995to present b3wQ3
The given map chart depicts the information about the improvement of the village of Rye mouth from 1995to present. From the overview of the given data it's vivid that, there is a wide disparity in the development of the village of Rye mouth between In the previous time and today's. After having a keen observation of the given data it's illustrated that, in 1995, in the north side, there was farmland and along with it there was a forest park in the east side of the village. Moreover, there were few houses too in the north side but in the west direction there was housing for people. Besides, from the north side. There was a single road constructed with which hotel and shop were connected along with road. Furthermore, in the south direction, fish market, cafe and fishing port were also built. In the present time, in the north side, golf course has been newly built along with tennis court. Housing facility is more added in the west side. Apart from it, in the south east side car park facility is established with hotel. Whereas, shop are changed with restaurant and in the south side, apartments are newly built and cafe remained same as in the past and fishing port is removed.
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map chart depicts the information about the improvement of the village of Rye mouth from 1995to present.

From the overview of the
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given
data it's vivid that, there is a wide disparity in the development of the village of Rye mouth between In the previous time and
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today
's.

After having a keen observation of the
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given
data it's illustrated that, in 1995, in the
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north
side, there was farmland and along with it there was a forest park in the east side of the village.
Moreover
, there were few
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houses
too in the
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north
side
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but
in the west direction there was housing for
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people
.
Besides
, from the
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north
side. There was a single road constructed with which hotel and shop
were connected
along with road.
Furthermore
, in the south direction, fish market,
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and fishing port were
also
built.

In the present time, in the
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north
side, golf course has been
newly
built along with tennis court. Housing facility is more
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added
in the west side. Apart from it, in the
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south east
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side car
park facility
is established
with hotel. Whereas, shop are
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changed
with restaurant and in the south side, apartments are
newly
built and
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
remained same as in the past and fishing port
is removed
.

IELTS academic The given map chart depicts the information about the improvement of the village of Rye mouth from 1995to present

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212 words
6.0
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