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Many people think that students must study science subjects such as math and physics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that students must study science subjects such as math and physics. Wga7b
In this day and age, natural science subjects are getting more and more attention from students and parents. Some argue that students are required to study science subjects such as Maths and Physics. I completely disagree with this statement. There are several reasons why students do not necessarily study science. One of the most reasons is that social studies are equally important. Today, many companies need graduates from social disciplines. For example, entertainment companies, media companies, and you need more knowledge in social than science. Another reason is that not everyone can acquire knowledge of Math and Physics. These subjects all require logical thinking and sharpness, so forcing students to study science is impossible. Although the importance of science subjects cannot be denied, in my opinion, society subjects are a discipline that students should study. I hope people have a balanced view of both these subjects.
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IELTS academic Many people think that students must study science subjects such as math and physics.

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