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maket in your city and food, dishes

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My city has lots of food maket and they are open every day. In those we can buy whatever food we want, such as fresh food like fish, shrimp, crab, squid, egg, meet, vegetable and fruit. In addition, they also sell sweet soup, cakes made from rice flour, rice noodles, pho and spring rolls. Cho Lon is the market in the city center, they sell all we need such as clothes, shoes, toys, housewares and so on.
My city has lots of food
maket and
they are open every day. In those we can
buy
whatever food we want, such as fresh food like fish, shrimp, crab, squid, egg,
meet
, vegetable and fruit.
In addition
, they
also
sell sweet soup, cakes made from rice flour, rice noodles,
pho
and spring rolls.
Cho
Lon is the market in the city center, they sell all we need such as clothes, shoes, toys, housewares and
so
on.
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IELTS academic maket in your city and food, dishes

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