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Interpret the data in the line graph and make a report 06lDG
The supplied line graph demonstrates the active users of different social platforms every month over the time-span of 5 years from 2010 to 2015. Overall, total active users for every network increase consistently in the given period. Facebook has numerous users both in the beginning and at the end of the era. And Twitter remains the one with the least number of users in 2015. Facebook, which had about a 600million users in 2010 saw a consistent increment in the new registrations and rocketed until 2015 with a total of 1600million in the latter. On the other hand, Twitter having no users at the start attracted quite a few number of people up to 2014 and gets plateaued. This indicates that the total number of people using it in 2015 stands at 380million approximately. While WhatsApp which had marked it's count as 400M in 2013 had a sudden surge in the people using it and has about 980M in 2015, which is significantly high compared with the other three. WeChat starting from 2011 influences a good amount of people and having a continuous increment in the registrations reaches 680M in 2015. Finally, Instagram, having a moderate number of users at the start experienced growth until a year, and then it stabilizes at 400million in the latter.
The supplied line graph demonstrates the active users

of
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social platforms every month over the

time-span of 5 years from 2010 to 2015.

Overall
, total active
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users
for every network increase

consistently
in the
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given
period. Facebook has numerous

users both in the beginning and at the
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end
of the era.

And Twitter remains the one with the least
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number
of
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users
in 2015.

Facebook, which had about a
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600million
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users
in 2010
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saw
a consistent increment in

the new registrations and rocketed until 2015 with a total of
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1600million
in the latter.

On the other hand
, Twitter having no
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users
at the
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start
attracted quite a few
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number
of
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people


up to 2014 and
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gets
plateaued. This indicates that the total
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number
of
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people
using it in 2015 stands

at
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380million
approximately. While WhatsApp which had marked
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it's
count as 400M in 2013 had a sudden surge

in the
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people
using it and has about 980M in 2015, which is
significantly
high compared with the other three.

WeChat starting from 2011 influences a
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good
amount of
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people
and having a continuous increment in the

registrations reaches 680M in 2015.
Finally
, Instagram, having a moderate
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number
of
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users
at the
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start
experienced

growth until a year, and then it stabilizes at
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400million
in the latter.
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IELTS academic Interpret the data in the line graph and make a report

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6 paragraphs
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5.5
Overall Band Score
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