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Indian's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000

Indian's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000 RRBDp
The bar graph presents the percentage of three different figures for donations to the GDP in India, period of four decades, from 1960 to 2000. Overall, agriculture declined at the end, whereas, industry and services increased gradually. Services peaked up. Agriculture experienced an upward trend in 1960, reaching above sixty per cent. Industry and services are almost equal, the difference that there is 1 or 2 per cent in comparison, in 1960. Figure for 1970, there is fewer per cent for agriculture, compared to figure for agriculture in 1960. Others, including services and industry went up, aproximately 24 and 21 per cent respectively. Agriculture decreased gradully, accounted for 1980, there is a decrease that is equal to 13 per cent. Industry reached at about 25 per cent and services arrived at around 28 per cent in 1980. Industry experienced a downward trend, whereas, services experienced an upward trend in 1990. Agriculture went down to 31 per cent. Services peaked up, in comparison with figure for agriculture in 1960, are equal. Agriculture decreased to 13 per cent approximately. Industry is equal to precious line for itself in 1990 compared to 2000.
The bar graph presents the percentage of three
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for donations to the GDP in India, period of four decades, from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
,
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agriculture
declined at the
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, whereas,
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industry
and
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services
increased
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Services
peaked up.
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Agriculture
experienced an upward trend in 1960, reaching above sixty per cent.
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Industry
and
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services
are almost
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equal
, the difference that there is 1 or 2 per cent
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, in 1960.
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for 1970, there is fewer per cent for
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agriculture
, compared to
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for
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agriculture
in 1960. Others, including
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services
and
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went up,
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24 and 21 per cent
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Agriculture
decreased
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gradully
, accounted for 1980, there is a decrease
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equal
to 13 per cent.
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Industry
reached at about 25 per cent and
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services
arrived at around 28 per cent in 1980.
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Industry
experienced a downward trend, whereas,
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services
experienced an upward trend in 1990.
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Agriculture
went down to 31 per cent.
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peaked up,
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agriculture
in 1960, are
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equal
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Agriculture
decreased to 13 per cent approximately.
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Industry
is
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equal
to precious line for itself in 1990 compared to 2000.
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IELTS academic Indian's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000

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