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. IELTS Bar Chart THE AGE OF THE POPULATION OF ICELAND BETWEEN 1990 AND 2020

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THE BAR CHART GIVES THE INFORMATION OF THE PUBLIC IN DIFFERENT AGE GROUPS (0-14, 15-24, 25-54, 55-64, 65 AND OVER) IN ICELAND BETWEEN 1990 AND 2020. OVERALL, THE AGE GROUP 25-54 CONSISTS OF MORE PEOPLE DURING THE PERIOD WHEREAS THE LEAST COUNT OF PUBLIC IS UNDER THE AGE GROUP OF 55-64. IN TERMS OF 25-54 AGE GROUP, INTIALLY THE POPULATION IS AROUND 30%. AFTER TEN YEARS IT HAS BEEN RISED TO 35%. FUTHUR INCREAED TO AROUND 38% AND AT THE END OF THE PERIOD IT HAS BEEN ELEVATED TO ALMOST 50%. WHILE 0-14 AGE GROUP POPULATION IS BEEN STEADILY DECREASING UNTIL THE END OF THE OF THE PERIOD STARTING WITH 25% AND ENDING WITH 18% PUBLIC. MOREOVER, 15-24 AGE GROUP IS ALSO SEEN IN THE DECREASING SENARIO WITH THE PERCENTAGES OF (21%, 19%, 15% AND 8%). ON THE OTHER HAND, WHEN WE SEE THE 65 AND OTHER AGE GROUP INTIALLY IT HAS THE POPULATION OF 11%. IN THE YEAR 2000 IT IS NOTICED THAT THE POPULATION REMAINS SAME AS THAT OF THE PREVIOUS DECADE. BUT AFTER THE COUPLE OF YEARS IT HAS BEEN RISED TO 15% IN THE YEAR 2010 AND SLIGHTLY DECREASED AT THE END OF THE PERIOD. NOW IN THE AGE GROUP 55-64 INTIALLY HAS 12% POPULATION AND DECREASED TO 12% IN THE NEXT DECADE AND REMAINED WITH SAME POPULATION UNTIL 2010 AND FINALLY DECREASED TO 10% IN 2020.
THE BAR CHART GIVES THE INFORMATION OF THE PUBLIC IN
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GROUPS
(0-14, 15-24, 25-54, 55-64, 65 AND OVER) IN ICELAND BETWEEN 1990 AND 2020.

OVERALL
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25-54 CONSISTS OF MORE
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OF 55-64.

IN TERMS OF 25-54
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INTIALLY
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IS AROUND 30%. AFTER TEN YEARS IT HAS BEEN
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IT HAS
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DECADE AND REMAINED WITH SAME
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UNTIL 2010 AND
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DECREASED TO 10% IN 2020.
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