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I think Jack and I would make good travel partners. We like having trips and enjoying scenic places. Both of us like to explore the cultural and historical aspects of a country. In addition, neither of us likes to go shopping. When we go on trips, Jack always brings food, water and I bring a map and medicine. Jack is a cashier when I want to buy anything I will call Jack. We want to go to the beach. We’d like to visit Phu Quoc beach together. Both of us like swimming, snorkeling, windsurfing, and spending time relaxing in resorts

I think Jack and I would make good travel partners. We like having trips and enjoying scenic places. Both of us like to explore the cultural and historical aspects of a country. In addition, neither of us likes to go shopping. When we go on trips, Jack always brings food, water and I bring a map and medicine. Jack is a cashier when I want to buy anything I will call Jack. We want to go to the beach. We’d like to visit Phu Quoc beach together. Both of us like swimming, snorkeling, windsurfing, and spending time relaxing in resorts 8G12r
I think Jack and I would make good travel partners. We like having trips and enjoying scenic places. Both of us like to explore the cultural and historical aspects of a country. In addition, neither of us likes to go shopping. When we go on trips, Jack always brings food, water and I bring a map and medicine. Jack is a cashier when I want to buy anything I will call Jack. We want to go to the beach. We’d like to visit Phu Quoc beach together. Both of us like swimming, snorkeling, windsurfing, and spending time relaxing in resorts
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travel partners. We like having trips and enjoying scenic places. Both of us like to explore the cultural and historical aspects of a country.
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IELTS academic I think Jack and I would make good travel partners. We like having trips and enjoying scenic places. Both of us like to explore the cultural and historical aspects of a country. In addition, neither of us likes to go shopping. When we go on trips, Jack always brings food, water and I bring a map and medicine. Jack is a cashier when I want to buy anything I will call Jack. We want to go to the beach. We’d like to visit Phu Quoc beach together. Both of us like swimming, snorkeling, windsurfing, and spending time relaxing in resorts

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