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how is my jouney in vung tau

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ART OF SKATEBOADING’ The place i love the most in HO CHI MINH has to be vung tau beacause i extremly love the life style here, people is friendly as well and the best things i like most in vung tau definately are foods. Young people here really different from in HO CHI MINH bacause they more generous than young people in HO CHI MINH. when the first time i come here i realy into people, who is play skateboarding they look realy cool and devoted but sometimes people who are older guys probably don’t like about it. I don’t know the reason. Might be they think it is dangerous. So I’d love to share my top picks for the best things to do in VUNG TAU. BEACH AND FOOD IN VUNG TAU LOOKS LIKE? My parents always take me to vung tau after the final term because i have many memories with it and when i was young i used to play volley ball on the beach with my dad, fly a kite but nowdays have many people and crowded so we can do it. Another best thing i definitely would say that is foods in vung tau extremely interesting and fresh. As far as i know you should try “hu tieu, yogurt, banh khot, seafood” it extremely amazing. If you go to vung tau, you shouldn’t miss out that great foods
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and the best things
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like most in
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cool and devoted
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BEACH AND
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TAU LOOKS LIKE?

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IELTS academic how is my jouney in vung tau

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