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conclusion, this graph displays the distinct differences and similarities between the favorable methods of coffee and tea consumption in five cities of Australia. It is clearly elucidated that the lowest bar belongs to the option of buying coffee, whereas, visiting cafés for drinking tea and coffee is the most popular method, and in the middle comes getting instant coffee.
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conclusion
, this graph displays the distinct differences and similarities between the favorable methods of

coffee

and tea consumption in five

cities

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of
Australia. It
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is


clearly


elucidated that the lowest bar belongs to the option of buying

coffee, whereas, visiting cafés for drinking tea and

coffee

is the most popular method, and in the middle

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comes


getting instant

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coffee
.
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