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The given charts illustrate how much forest and timber are there in five distinct areas. Overall, although North America and South America are not account for a significant percentage of forest, over a half of timber manufactured by these regions. At the same time, Africa accounts for the highest percentage of forest, the timber industry of this region does not develop. Looking at the chart with more detail, the proportion of areas covered with tree in Africa makes up a large majority of world forest, at 27%, as oppose to a quarter that of North American. In addition, the forest coverage of Europe is 18%, which is slightly higher than that of South American. The green zones in Asia only take up a small portion, at 14%. Regarding the figure for timber, the timber production in North America constitutes the highest percentage with 30%. Meanwhile, the amount of timber produced in South America and Europe are 23% and 20% respectively. Moreover, the figure for Asia is 18%, which is twice as high as that of Africa.
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charts illustrate how much
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forest
and
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timber
are there in five distinct areas.

Overall
, although North America and South America are not account for a significant percentage of
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forest
, over a half of
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timber
manufactured by these regions. At the same time, Africa accounts for the highest percentage of
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forest
, the
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timber
industry of this region does not develop.

Looking at the chart with more detail, the proportion of areas covered with tree in Africa
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makes
up a large majority of world
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forest
, at 27%,
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a quarter that of North American.
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, the
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coverage of Europe is 18%, which is
slightly
higher than that of South American. The green zones in Asia
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only
take up a
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small
portion, at 14%.

Regarding the figure for
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timber
, the
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timber
production in North America constitutes the highest percentage with 30%. Meanwhile, the amount of
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timber
produced in South America and Europe are 23% and 20%
respectively
.
Moreover
, the figure for Asia is 18%, which is twice as high as that of Africa.
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IELTS academic forest and timber in 5 different countries

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